reverb13: day 15
walk with me
::
This post is part of Reverb 13:
Day 15: Give us a sensory tour of 2013. How would you describe the year
that’s passing in terms of Sight? Sound? Smell? Taste? Touch?
::
.
if your smile
lights up a room,
then you are my sun
.
the timbre
of your voice
rolls over my skin
in a melody
of remembrance
.
the scent of snow
on a cold dark morning
wraps me in a warmth
that has no science
.
i dream of
raspberry lips and
chocolate sighs
sealed with salty
kisses
.
one fingertip
tracing miles
of a journey
held fast
with borrowed
twine
.
December 15th, 2013 at 8:44 am
nice…i like the intimacy of your year….the last stanza in particular…the tracing of the journey on a fingertip…may this year coming be a special one for you…
December 15th, 2013 at 8:46 am
goosebumps here . . . not that it’s the first time that’s happened in response to reading your words. xo
December 15th, 2013 at 12:10 pm
Kelly, this is beautiful. Really beautiful! What a privilege it is to get to read your words.
December 15th, 2013 at 1:52 pm
i am at last beginning my reverb visits, and this first stop becomes my first steps, borrowed twine and unscientific warmth keeping me company. you are truly the best. ever.
December 15th, 2013 at 6:38 pm
Stop making me cry.
I’m kidding. Please don’t stop.
December 15th, 2013 at 10:27 pm
Just like that tree, your words have a beauty that contains the nicest twist, and we don’t end up where we thought we would.
December 16th, 2013 at 5:00 am
Sigh!