clouds of clarity

pass by slowly

in a white-hot slice

of sky

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4 Responses to “clouds of clarity”

  • Susan Says:

    Your words and images always inspire me and make me stop to pay attention to my world … thank you.

  • Gerry Miller Says:

    David and I are in southern NV through the winters and then move to Cedar UT for the summer. We move to avoid the extreme temperatures in southern NV and this poem captures the discomfort of a July day in that location! So much said in so few words!
    Gerry

  • Grace Says:

    Sharp and gritty ~ I love it ~

    Can you write to me Kelly? I would like to invite you to host a Poetics Prompt over at D’verse ~ Enjoy your weekend ~

  • X Says:

    Ha. So your weather has not been
    much different than ours —
    the clouds at least
    give a little relief.

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