freedom’s clarity
one brief glimpse
through this self-imposed fence
reveals
nothing at all
and all that exists
in the tangled-up briar
of dawn
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A poem a day for 30 days, in honor of National Poetry Month. Day 10
I’m participating in NaPoWriMo, and Writer’s Digest Poem a Day Challenge.
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April 10th, 2015 at 7:33 pm
Perfect last line–and the brevity brings it home without needing an extra word.
April 12th, 2015 at 3:25 am
perfect ~