the luminous dictation
of shadow
is a pernicious master
always telling stories
you wish to be untrue
i live in a glass house
beside an ocean of allegory
the warmth of the sun
burns holes in my persona
the plate i offer is filled
with door-shaped cookies
but just you try and leave
the epochal corner of sanity
i’ve carved in the shape
of false idol altar growth
you’ve no idea how much light
it takes to reveal
the vitiligo that’s running
down your chin like a chink
in the armour of your sentence
and i will keep you here
reshape you with a version
of my own black branched form
feed you wine and golden wafer
from a tray inscribed to say
from the solid root of darkness
you will bloom
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Linking in over at dVersePoets for Poetics today, where Anthony
gives us a list of words from which we must use at least five in a poem:
(Messiah, Allegory, Luminous, Plate, Shadow, Door, Persona,
Glass, Vitiligo, Epochal, Pernicious, Warmth).
Join us!
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May 27th, 2014 at 8:20 am
i live in a glass house by the ocean of allegory…ha….so cool….love how the title wraps into the verse as well…the sun burning holes in your persona as well…really some cool elements and you rocked the word list.
May 27th, 2014 at 8:38 am
blooming from darkness…nice. as always. how DO you do it?!
May 27th, 2014 at 3:09 pm
A great read. >KB
May 27th, 2014 at 3:13 pm
That warmth of the sun burning holes.. such contrast to that glass house.. you are a master in creating meaning in those colliding images.
May 27th, 2014 at 3:16 pm
the vitiligo that’s running
down your chin like a chink… very cool images that you create with those words…and a very cool closing stanza as well
May 27th, 2014 at 3:25 pm
Thank goodness for the epochal corner of sanity! And I like the idea of blooming from the root of darkness.
May 27th, 2014 at 3:35 pm
Amazing! Love how u used words in the title as well and it dives right into the poem itself; very clever… especially loved, “you’ve no idea how much sun
it takes to reveal
the vitiligo that’s running
down your chin like a chink” bold line
May 27th, 2014 at 3:39 pm
I think that eventually we all aspire to surface from darkness and soar.
May 27th, 2014 at 4:54 pm
Certainly not ‘Mrs Mediocrity’ with this piece! Wonderful, wonderful.
May 27th, 2014 at 6:01 pm
So many great images in this well-written poem using those words. My fav:
i live in a glass house
beside an ocean of allegory
May 27th, 2014 at 6:29 pm
Stellar writing Kelly, I am in awe ~ I love the ocean of allegory and use of vitiligo and ending line, you will bloom ~
May 27th, 2014 at 7:29 pm
wonderful, powerful.
May 27th, 2014 at 8:47 pm
This was full of great lines..but, I have to say I liked the plate of door shaped cookies the best.
May 27th, 2014 at 8:52 pm
i live in a glass house
beside an ocean of allegory…I just love this. A wonderful write and you did amazing on the words.
May 27th, 2014 at 9:48 pm
wow, just wow.
May 28th, 2014 at 12:40 am
The final stanza was boffo killer kick-Ass, & somehow I sensed the symbolism, the allegory of Racism that we are slowly breeding out of existence, ever so slowly; the Adventures of Genetic Love, where new skin tones are created, new people; and I dig it.
May 28th, 2014 at 3:08 pm
i live in a glass house
beside an ocean of allegory
and the last two lines made it for me