of moons, minuets,
and madness
the waltz of time has fewer ripples
than the calamity of youth
there is much to remember
and little to miss
except the key to everything
and even then, it’s nice to know
that one exists
i have a dancing map,
you know, the kind that shows
where to place your feet
two pair speckled across the page
in a sneeze of pattern
meaning nothing without music
i’m always so busy listening
i forget to follow directions
until i am left alone, arms flailing
on the opposite side of the room
this is the dance i was born to do
not the wallflower so much as the floor
each step you take leaves an imprint
and each night i crack the code
of your travels
i could follow you then
find my way home or at least
back to bed
but i have bells on my ankles
and this tattered ancient skirt
and the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers
i am night and you are shadow
turn and spin
turn and spin
i need the light of stars
upon my skin
.
.
.
.
Linking up with the fabulous dVerse poets for Open Link Night – join us
August 27th, 2013 at 8:58 am
a sneeze of pattern…smiles….yes, at times…what a warm intimate end as well…the personification of the moon and its bony fingers playing so that you can shed a bit light back….
August 27th, 2013 at 10:24 am
A lot of wonderful turns of phrase. The ending is perfecgtly landed.
August 27th, 2013 at 10:24 am
perfectly, that is. Irony.
August 27th, 2013 at 10:58 am
I particularly like the lines:
But I have bells on my ankles
and this tattered ancient skirt…
and, of course, that wonderful phrase ‘sneeze of pattern’.
August 27th, 2013 at 11:57 am
Love the twists, turns and spins . . . and the moons bony fingers.
August 27th, 2013 at 12:00 pm
Sweetness. “I need the light of stars upon my skin.” Gorgeous. Gorgeous.
August 27th, 2013 at 12:44 pm
wonderful images as always…my fav fav fav in this was ..and the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers… so good
August 27th, 2013 at 12:51 pm
i hear a harpsichord or is it a “heartsichord?”
August 27th, 2013 at 1:56 pm
Just a gorgeous write!
August 27th, 2013 at 2:12 pm
More than lovely, mysterious, whimsical, with a touch of sadness; fave line
is /i am night and you are shadow/ kin to darkness, yet drawn to the light; nice ride, thanks.
August 27th, 2013 at 3:08 pm
Enjoyed the way you wrote this poem and wondering whether everyone has a dance they are born to do!! I like especially “I am night and you are shadow.” They do have an interaction, don’t they….and also with the stars!
August 27th, 2013 at 3:26 pm
winsome and gentle – a splendid write ~ M
August 27th, 2013 at 3:45 pm
“I need the light of stars upon my skin”
Beautiful verses that appeal to heart. Such a splendid read throughout. The waltz of time and a sneeze of pattern- picturesque and wonderful.
August 27th, 2013 at 3:45 pm
…I am night and you are shadow… That is indeed poetry at it’s finest…. Beatiful work Mrs. Mediocrity
August 27th, 2013 at 4:00 pm
You have really taken us in your swirling minuet!
August 27th, 2013 at 5:03 pm
Such a lovely write.
August 27th, 2013 at 5:05 pm
This is a good example of a poem that is a metaphor and is rich in metaphors. Just that one line, the dance I was meant to do, brings the message home.
August 27th, 2013 at 5:09 pm
‘but i have bells on my ankles
and this tattered ancient skirt
and the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers’ — breathtaking, this just moved me to tears…
August 27th, 2013 at 5:10 pm
This piece is fabulous. The content outstanding. The form clever. This is by far the best piece I read from you and write great poetry. Glad you posted this piece.
August 27th, 2013 at 5:30 pm
So much beautiful imagery! Nothing mediocre about this verse 🙂
August 27th, 2013 at 5:36 pm
Beautifully thought out and exquisitely performed as any dance can be.>KB
August 27th, 2013 at 5:47 pm
Time acts as partner and words; your music acts as the progression develops then the coda repeats the song. Really musically wonderful!
August 27th, 2013 at 5:51 pm
The moon stanza is gorgeous! I love this.
August 27th, 2013 at 6:05 pm
little to miss
except the key to everything &
the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers
this is just a gorgeous poem to read… & i used to live for dancing (not quite sure what happened, perhaps i’ll go back there)
August 27th, 2013 at 6:08 pm
loved the movement of your words..like the ‘sneese of patterns’ twists and turns..’bells on ankles’ and ‘ancient tattered skirt’. the last line it my favorite..you the nght ..reflecting upon the shadow you can no longer keep pace with. Beautiful
August 27th, 2013 at 6:21 pm
Wow Kelly, you’ve done it again. Mysterious, magical, and magnificent in every way. A new favorite, those last 5 stanzas especially. Love.
August 27th, 2013 at 6:46 pm
beauty here
I hear the silver tingling of your bells…
August 27th, 2013 at 7:47 pm
Great lines..love this.. the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers. Beautifully penned.
August 27th, 2013 at 8:08 pm
Gorgeous images, and great rhythm made this such a pleasure to read.
Brilliant write.
August 27th, 2013 at 8:17 pm
Beautiful and romantic. Loved sneeze of patter and the moons boney finger, and starlight on skin.
August 27th, 2013 at 9:22 pm
A loose swaying feeling, this poem, and so beautifully cinched together at the end! Lovely.
August 27th, 2013 at 9:27 pm
this was the dance I was born to do..we all need to find that dance..nice rhythm..
August 27th, 2013 at 10:55 pm
Just beautiful, as always. I loved this dance.
August 27th, 2013 at 11:20 pm
there is much to remember
and little to miss
except the key to everything
and even then, it’s nice to know
that one exists
you may have 2 versions of this comment. . .
your structure and careful construct are so well crafted and perfectly in tune with the notions within, becoming a brilliant combination that sings with a subtleness that packs punch because of its controlled quietness
August 27th, 2013 at 11:30 pm
Really fun,whimsical, beautifully written. Loveeee the last line!
August 28th, 2013 at 1:54 am
This is just full of wonderful expressions.
August 28th, 2013 at 1:58 am
This is the dance of hearts, the dance of words, your opening lines set well with me.. how life ,as we grow older takes the tempo of a slow song. Bells on my ankles took me back to gypsy skirts and cheese cloth tops.. in fact I travelled far with this – so thank you.
August 28th, 2013 at 12:28 pm
And Congratulations! On your WIN! (Sorry for the delay, long night)
August 28th, 2013 at 12:45 pm
Glorious melancholia. I loved the imagery used. The below quote is a fully formed poem in itself:
“i have a dancing map,
you know, the kind that shows
where to place your feet
two pair speckled across the page
in a sneeze of pattern
meaning nothing without music.”
August 28th, 2013 at 2:24 pm
Gorgeous (I know I’ve used that too often but it’s true) and hearty congratulations on your inclusion in Boston Poetry. You deserve every success :)!
August 28th, 2013 at 3:26 pm
I love these lines:
‘but i have bells on my ankles
and this tattered ancient skirt
and the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers
and the lines about the dancing map are nice.
Beautiful imagery and wording in this poem.
August 28th, 2013 at 5:49 pm
“and the moon plays an old piano song
with her broken, bony fingers”
Great word choice, I love the imagery and feel to this piece. Nicely done!
August 29th, 2013 at 10:26 am
I am dancing with you as I read, following your footsteps to the edge and back to the center–the “waltz of time” and light of stars–so sad and yet beautiful.
August 30th, 2013 at 9:50 am
when you dance and swirl, you sweat poetry. it lives inside you.
gorgeous.