autofocus
one day you find yourself
sitting in the circle
of every choice
you’ve ever made
the edges are a bit fuzzy
and there’s a ten foot tall labyrinth
between you and center
the only way back
is to eat your way through
the blue bowl
of continuous sky
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April 28th, 2013 at 10:20 am
nice…love the set up of having to sit among your choice…the labyrinth…and eating your way through the sky…ha…wicked cool…hoping my choices dont scare me too much
April 28th, 2013 at 1:03 pm
The sky can be a daunting meal, but the trapped have sharp teeth.
April 28th, 2013 at 8:52 pm
This is just lovely, Kelly. It feels like Alice in wonderland in reverse, the toadstool what is up above and all around. Thanks. K.
May 1st, 2013 at 12:39 pm
Gorgeous imagery. Sky suggests hope despite choices made. Part of me wanted to analyze.thought better to simply take it end several more reads.there is time enough to think.