you have no song
the moon has not written
you steal them in the silver haze of twilight
fighting hard to keep from being swallowed
by dark forest and beckoning fern
snatching words and phrases by the tail
as you fly from branch to broken
in a black ribbon melody of midnight
an owl in the pines smiles at your attempts
to scribble scrabble puzzle out each line
with dissonance and hollow heart echoes
into a ransom note of bittersweet cacophony
hoping only that one star will listen
all the while knowing it will come to rest
in the cached out core of a long dead oak
with shiny bits of treasure you collect at dawn
and offer up as sacrifice to a beacon
that will never shine the light of beauty
on your coal-flavored eye or add the flair
of accessory to your brittle silhouette
but no matter no matter
you mourn you caw
you fly
January 15th, 2013 at 9:10 am
the truth of poetry and where it comes from, gorgeously told. i love that smiling owl, he all knowing too wise. keeping his secrets.
January 15th, 2013 at 9:19 am
dang…felt piece…love how the light finds the tree…the tree the altar of beauty you capture….yet not attain…and mourn..nice…
January 15th, 2013 at 9:28 am
amazingly beautiful………
January 15th, 2013 at 1:07 pm
From branch to broken… Love this
I have spent many nights pondering, flitting from place to place. This is beautiful
January 15th, 2013 at 1:11 pm
what a wonderful capture of a process i think we all can relate to in one or the other way..love the images you use..
January 15th, 2013 at 1:55 pm
I could see this as I read it, so I say this is a great poem. Loved it.
January 15th, 2013 at 2:12 pm
Kelly, this is a wonderful ! Beautiful!
January 15th, 2013 at 3:06 pm
So many beautiful phrasings here! Loved
” into a ransom note of bittersweet cacophony ” among others. A lovely write.
January 15th, 2013 at 3:17 pm
This is beautiful, specially the opening lines ~
January 15th, 2013 at 3:17 pm
loved how you displayed the bird traits in your lines
January 15th, 2013 at 3:42 pm
ransom note of bittersweet cacophony… I especially like that. As always, beautiful writing.
January 15th, 2013 at 3:46 pm
I loved this–especially the opening lines–beautifully done!
January 15th, 2013 at 3:51 pm
fighting hard…to fly…oh this is beautiful, rich, and deep.
January 15th, 2013 at 4:20 pm
You followed the universal bird theme well. Owls have always scared me for some reason, so I was glad to see one smiling in this one 🙂 Great write.
January 15th, 2013 at 4:21 pm
Beautiful from title to closure. What more can I say?
January 15th, 2013 at 4:30 pm
Beautiful! “but no matter no matter
you mourn you caw
you fly” absolutely brilliant ending!
January 15th, 2013 at 4:36 pm
so delicately beautiful *sigh*
January 15th, 2013 at 4:40 pm
Great crow poem–seeing under the wing and feather to the magpie heart. I love it–and you know they’re a favorite subject of my own–not to mention a presence I always like to see in the worlds around us and within us. Especially like the song-like quality of the ending lines.
January 15th, 2013 at 5:31 pm
Loving the crow poem! Summons fantastic images of word captures 🙂
January 15th, 2013 at 5:43 pm
right on… I take no cred for this gift of poetry… it comes to me & I hand it down to the notepad… strongly told my friend! beautiful
January 15th, 2013 at 5:50 pm
the owl in the pines has me smiling, too. this is wonderfully phrased, catching the crow in a shining moment.
January 15th, 2013 at 6:59 pm
… you mourn, you caw, you fly… this strong ending phrase gives the reader both a sense of powerlessness and assent to the fates.
January 15th, 2013 at 7:15 pm
The third and last stanzas were my favorites in this. Amazing imagery here.
January 15th, 2013 at 7:33 pm
This is so beautiful. Love your words, love the moon and your poem grasps whatever in me responds to beauty.
January 15th, 2013 at 8:18 pm
you have no song
the moon has not written
I feel like the title alone could be a poem, every inch of this poem is dripping in poetic delight.
January 15th, 2013 at 9:13 pm
ah, this was fun to read outloud, had a classic feel with some unexpected images. very fun to read, enjoyed very much.
January 15th, 2013 at 10:02 pm
A very pretty poem – in a way kind of the opposite of personification, as the speaker/poet becomes very crow-like. And funny that roosters crow (in the morning.) Lots of beautiful lines and phrases here. The branch to broken is lovely. k.
January 15th, 2013 at 10:09 pm
so beautiful…the words and the photo.
January 15th, 2013 at 11:09 pm
as you fly from branch to broken
in a black ribbon melody of midnight
This is a cracking set
and with the owl sewn in
the atmosphere is sealed
January 16th, 2013 at 3:46 am
The beauty of this left me awestruck.
January 16th, 2013 at 7:45 am
This is gorgeous! I see silver and ebony…beautiful write!
January 16th, 2013 at 7:54 am
..A beautiful write with such a lovely cover… i am smiling…
January 16th, 2013 at 8:09 am
the image is the icing on top of a delicious helping of poetry!
January 16th, 2013 at 11:36 am
i like this line –
into a ransom note of bittersweet cacophony
January 16th, 2013 at 12:54 pm
So interesting…how you make distinct pictures that capture the how process of poetry evolves. Great job.
January 16th, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Loved it. Your metaphor is spot on and so painflly understood. Gorgeously sad.
January 16th, 2013 at 1:27 pm
Wow, Kelly you just keep getting better and better.
January 16th, 2013 at 5:58 pm
What they all said and a heartfelt: wow!
January 16th, 2013 at 8:24 pm
I love this:
“as you fly from branch to broken
in a black ribbon melody of midnight”
January 17th, 2013 at 12:02 am
Now THAT is some happenin’ poetry!!
At first I took it to mean me, human has no song the moon has not written. And perhaps this can be seen that way. That’s the thing about wonderful poetry, we make it about us with words shared around these blogging firelights.
I love the cached out long deal oak bit. And of course the black ribbon melody of midnight is a super poem in itself.
I think I’ll go now and Google “habits of the crow.” who knows where the search might take me? definitely where the moon is shining.
xoxo
January 17th, 2013 at 12:13 am
Well, that was interesting. I read on Wikipedia they do prefer oaks for nesting, then conifers. And crows are monogamous!
I love how YOU write on nature so much, the best poetic stuff’s in there.
January 17th, 2013 at 10:44 am
very beautiful images used in your poem, even their meaning is not far behind
February 5th, 2013 at 3:52 pm
I remember reading this and was unable to comment on my phone at the time…but this is stunning poetry and an absolute favourite of mine….simply beautiful, Kelly 🙂