letters from the fog
of delirium
my wit has left the building and
elvis is everywhere
i have wrinkles on my ankles and
my favorite pajamas
are unraveling
i love crows but that
doesn’t make me dark
at least not as far
as you know
i survive on
hope and chocolate
wine and water
pickles and promises
i spent the first 49 years
of my life hatching
a wise old crone
i expected to hate her
but find myself
suddenly falling in
love
my sister cried when
elvis died
and all i could do
was hold her hand
while she said
yeah yeah yeah
and that’s from a song
you’ve probably never
heard
.
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September 25th, 2012 at 8:58 am
Wonderful, my Friend. Simply wonderful. You’ve chased my Blergh with a Capital B away today…
That closing set of stanza’s is stellar.
September 25th, 2012 at 9:09 am
Ingenious and artful melding of the old and new. Touches so many things I find in myself.
September 25th, 2012 at 9:11 am
” . . . at least not as far as you know.” oh my. i reached that line and began to smile, felt a bit of your smile behind the rest of the words, daring me to believe them or not; it felt like a test i badly wanted to pass. i love this wise old crone, although old is a word i don’t believe.
September 25th, 2012 at 9:34 am
Aww, Kelly, this is wonderful! I love how we like to call ourselves “crone” and “old guy,” but are pretty much ageless between these lines. And I was in front of the TV when the Elvis news broke. I didn’t cry, but knew that there had been a change in my life, much as the changes you so poetically describe. We grew up! 🙂 xo
September 25th, 2012 at 9:43 am
ah, to be 50 again! as always, you touch me in places that i don’t know i still had. apparently, we have the same pair of pajamas!
September 25th, 2012 at 9:45 am
Love this, the second and third para’s could be me!
September 25th, 2012 at 10:05 am
I adore the title, worthy of a novel. You take us effortlessly across time and space, your poem traversing a world. Hope and chocolate sounds perfectly reasonable sustenance to me as long as I can wash it down with coffee. I owe the joy of using AdBlock to you – Michael Gundlach (the programmer) sent me a haiku so it only seems fair to share it with you :):
Magnolia bloom
floats in a bowl of water
sunning on the porch.
September 25th, 2012 at 10:42 am
love. love. love.
gentle and soft, strong and steadfast.
September 25th, 2012 at 11:12 am
Somehow I thought my comment had made it here, but then realized that it hadn’t–the crone in me just wants to stand up and cheer! What a great write Kelly!
September 25th, 2012 at 11:15 am
Your creativity continues to inspire me! Oh how I remember the Elvis days. As a child my family would pour into our station wagon and go to the drive in movies. We went to all the Elvis movies and once I went with my mom to his concert. We both screamed and cried! Ha!
September 25th, 2012 at 11:42 am
elvis…who’s elvis…? smiles…just kidding…ha..he’s a legend for sure and think your sis was not the only girl crying when he died..and i agree with joe…you’re ageless between those lines
September 25th, 2012 at 11:49 am
I’m with Debi on this one: Old? Pshaw. Everything about this says otherwise ♥
September 25th, 2012 at 2:20 pm
Fantastic. I loved the adventure through your thoughts, especially pickles and promises.
September 25th, 2012 at 3:08 pm
Pickles, Elvis and a Beatles reference…love it! I am an old crone who hope she has a bit of wisdom. 🙂
September 25th, 2012 at 3:22 pm
much enjoyed…love the last lines…
September 25th, 2012 at 3:24 pm
Great piece, well written. I could say so much but all I have is – wow
September 25th, 2012 at 3:31 pm
i thoroughly enjoy your sway through time. petting the moments along the way…. pickles and promises! this is simply delight filled.
September 25th, 2012 at 3:57 pm
Kelly–I flippin’ love this. Especially love that fourth stanza.
September 25th, 2012 at 4:33 pm
hope and chocolate
wine and
pickles – sounds perfect 🙂
Lib
September 25th, 2012 at 5:45 pm
Beautifully written. I think we have to embrace ourselves at whatever stage of life we are…whether we are a young ‘whippersnapper’ or a ‘crone.’ To remember when Elvis died is quite something. I remember as well. I guess this qualifies me as a crone. LOL.
September 25th, 2012 at 6:11 pm
This brought an unexpected smile to my face. Loved giving birth to a crone – in my case, I’ve given birth to an old man.
September 25th, 2012 at 6:20 pm
ha i am glad you love the crone….smiles…wrinkles on ankles, really? i have that to look forward to? i like ankles…yeah yeah yeah…i think i am thinking of a different song though…smiles…
September 25th, 2012 at 6:48 pm
Lots of nice detail and I especially enjoyed these lines:
“…i survive on
hope and chocolate
wine and water
pickles and promises…”
Roger ☺
September 25th, 2012 at 7:07 pm
I rather like this person, reminds me of, well…me (though I’m a wee bit older). Yes, frayed jammies, chocolate, wine, a wee bit of the “darker” side. Yes, I totally get her. A well-earned place to be.
September 25th, 2012 at 7:26 pm
From on crone to another, love it!
September 25th, 2012 at 7:53 pm
Love this …i survive on
hope and chocolate
wine and water….some days are that way 🙂
September 25th, 2012 at 8:23 pm
Nice…I like pajamas and crone ~ And I found myself humming, yeah..yeah..yeah at the end ~
September 25th, 2012 at 8:35 pm
This has such a lovely feel to it. I love that you fell in love with yourself. If we can’t love ourselves, who can we love?
Loved all of this
September 25th, 2012 at 9:20 pm
Elvis who? hahaha all the references were grand and yeah we are only as old as we feel no matter if the cat calls one an old fart.
September 25th, 2012 at 9:52 pm
Oh Kelly, this is so precious and sweet 🙂
September 25th, 2012 at 10:45 pm
hey
this write just held me there . . .
i didnt so much read
as
glide
thats a gift
thank you 😀
September 26th, 2012 at 11:01 am
Wonderful life reflection. Love those opening lines!
September 26th, 2012 at 12:26 pm
On the grin here–I love my inner crone as well, even though she’s a lot less inner than she used to be–delirium isn’t always a bad thing, or fog either, in this case, anyway.
September 26th, 2012 at 2:32 pm
A poem about your birthday? I absolutely love this…so very thoughtful, but open, honest, exposing yourself (not literally!! Ha ha)….about wanting people to know that there are things that shouldn’t be assumed, but also reaffirming that you are our own person and still living life- at least that’s what I got…bloody brilliant
September 26th, 2012 at 8:33 pm
when the news of Elvis’ death splashed across the television screen, i was in a hospital ward with my beloved 53 year old dad, who was just told he had 8 weeks to live with his advanced cancer. i cared not about Elvis, and not even my chocolate that is the cure for everything could change that day, or anything… ever again. Sept 28, 1977. Elvis died in August. Arden died in Sept.
Not even chocolate….
in fondest, Tilda