baby, baby
you got the moves
and she rolled her eyes
then closed them
raised her arms high
above her head to
sway like pink cosmos
in a hot
summer breeze
and he thought
invitation
when all she really
wanted
was enough decoration
to disguise the fact that
she was already
dancing
with her favorite
partner
.
.
.
Linking up with the fabulous dVerse poets for Poetics, join us!
May 6th, 2012 at 9:21 am
oh YEAH!
May 6th, 2012 at 10:41 am
ha..nice…loved the swaying like pink cosmos in a hot summer breeze..what else do you need…
May 6th, 2012 at 10:48 am
ohhhhh i love this one. for some reason my mind went straight to the movie “dirty dancing”
i LOVE that movie !!
May 6th, 2012 at 10:59 am
smiles…beautiful…ha…she was already dancing with her favorite partner..and nice touch with cosmos too to expand that…smiles.
May 6th, 2012 at 11:03 am
Foxy.Like it.
May 6th, 2012 at 11:57 am
Dancing with her favourite partner- felt like this might be bad news for the other guy who thought he had an ‘invitation’….this was sensual, sultry and smouldering…. And I wonder how many people this has happened to…this presents music and dance as the perfect escape – very nice indeed!
May 6th, 2012 at 1:18 pm
so fun! and what a great photo.
May 6th, 2012 at 3:38 pm
I think I jumped off the deep end her but this spoke to me of self-possession. My misreading or not I love the way you reveal the action in your work. I always must know the next line. Excellent!
May 6th, 2012 at 3:39 pm
And with typos, best way to jump 🙂 – that would be ‘here’.
May 6th, 2012 at 5:26 pm
Wonderful dancing partners. Love this!
May 6th, 2012 at 6:57 pm
Sweet jesus! This is what I like, soft sensuous, to the point and pretty. Very nice.
May 7th, 2012 at 7:30 pm
I can see “Baby” and Swayzey now, love it
May 7th, 2012 at 9:31 pm
beautiful.
May 8th, 2012 at 6:42 am
Look at you, you feisty thing!