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13 Responses to “circle of life”

• Chazinator Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 8:50 am

  I think hope is the best place to be and go. The silence giving access to hope is wonderful, bringing us into the true source of our health.

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• claudia Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 9:13 am

  ugh i hate departures…but just love the silence of hope filling the air with its very own melody..nice..

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• Becky Sain Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 9:55 am

  The silence of hope… that’s a great line!
  Love, as usual. 🙂

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• Tracy Brown Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 10:21 am

  I love this image. Incredible! 🙂

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• honey Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 11:30 am

  hope is a great way to start a sunday.

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• brian Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 12:05 pm

  sometimes hope is just that…the hope in the silence as you leave…departures are hard…but hope for another meeting is good…nice kelly

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• hedgewitch Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 12:26 pm

  Much in little, my favorite kind of short poetry. Very much in tune with the simplicity of the picture.

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• Manicddaily Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 12:49 pm

  I’m not sure which is harder to hear–the silence of hope or whimpering of hope. (My hope tends to voice itself in the latter way.)

  Wonderfully compressed poem. K.

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• Kelly Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 1:25 pm

  Wow. So much in just a few lines.

  Kelly
  simplydeeppoetry.blogspot.com

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• Stuart McPherson Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 2:33 pm

  Hope in the simple flight of a bird. I love poems like this that have such economy of words but such depth of meaning. Fantastic and philosophical take on the prompt.

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• Frida Says:
  April 8th, 2012 at 5:50 pm

  Great words with a lovely image.

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• Anna Montgomery Says:
  April 9th, 2012 at 12:24 am

  I too was deeply struck by the ‘silence of hope’.

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• InkyTwig Says:
  April 9th, 2012 at 7:53 am

  yes – silence of hope – it is almost deafening in a way, yes? so beautiful.

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