walking off the edge
of the world
what happens to all
the questions
that go
unanswered?
what space do they
fill,
what mirror reveals
their reflection?
i see them sometimes
at night
when my eyes are filled
with insomnia
they glow in the dark,
a little
offering up silhouettes
and sibilance
but the edges
are always
blurred
and
when i reach my hand out
in the dark
there is nothing
there
but
i hear whispers
tiny bits
of vowel and consonant
syllable
inflection
rejection
perfection
hints of laughter
it’s funny though,
the way i never
hear
music.
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December 13th, 2011 at 2:52 pm
When you see intense color .. does your mouth water? Mine does. I dont hear music either. I mark it up to being tone deaf, seriously.
December 13th, 2011 at 3:05 pm
ugh all too real….love that they are glowing in the dark…whispering…laughing…that is how they feel…for sure…
December 13th, 2011 at 3:25 pm
the universe must be full with unanswered questions.. i love how you give them a face and personality in your words..maybe they drift through space and time until they find someone who answers them.. sometimes i imagine them like a bride waiting for her lover to become complete..
December 13th, 2011 at 3:54 pm
Intriguing, mesmerizing, like sleepwalking, floating past the answers without hearing them…I like it.
December 13th, 2011 at 4:11 pm
unanswered questions in their poetic form… very intriguing
December 13th, 2011 at 4:36 pm
What happens to all the unanswered questions… what gorgeous thoughts you’ve penned here.
December 13th, 2011 at 5:51 pm
I love this, magical.
December 13th, 2011 at 7:28 pm
Unanswered questions sure do litter time and space, some answer may be right in front of our face. But we never do see.
December 13th, 2011 at 7:33 pm
tiny bits
of vowel and consonant
syllable
inflection
rejection
perfection…
love these lines…so many unanswered questions.
December 13th, 2011 at 7:57 pm
I love the sound of this piece–the sense of whispers in the dark–Lovely, lovely write!
Audrey
@AudreyHowitt
December 13th, 2011 at 9:05 pm
YOU USED THE WORD SIBILANCE IN A POEM? you are my shero. but then i already knew that.
December 13th, 2011 at 9:24 pm
Never hear music?!?! Ack!
December 13th, 2011 at 10:01 pm
Is the flat world back? Or are you just edgy?
I’m afraid the questions that get answered just raise more questions, so either way, there you are.
Aen’t those whispers poems from the Muses? Don’t those words have their own music?
Enjoyed reading this. Very evocative.
December 13th, 2011 at 10:06 pm
Has to be one of my favorite posts from all of reverb so far. Brilliant.
December 13th, 2011 at 10:07 pm
amazing
December 13th, 2011 at 11:26 pm
tiny bits
of vowel and consonant
syllable
inflection
rejection
perfection
That is a cool way of bringing together some conflicting emotions.
December 13th, 2011 at 11:36 pm
I could spend days just gazing at this image … and read these words many, many times.
December 14th, 2011 at 10:41 am
Damn, I love the mood and feel of this!
December 14th, 2011 at 11:30 am
I really like “when my eyes are filled with insomnia,” as well as the ending, “it’s funny though, the way i never hear music.”
December 14th, 2011 at 1:55 pm
SO TRUE. I wish there was a play button in my brain that would put some lovely melody on repeat and drown out the rest of the noise.
December 15th, 2011 at 2:15 pm
This poem is very well done … scary tho… I’d be under the covers!