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This is my penciled-in story,
offered up in bits and pieces,
prose and poetry, image and
story. I'm so glad you are here,
pull up a chair, let's sit by
the fire and talk about life.
All text and photographs are the original work of Kelly LaFleur, unless otherwise noted. All rights reserved.
Be kind, don't copy! I can be contacted at mrsmediocrity(at)gmail(dot)com
June 21st, 2011 at 7:49 am
Gorgeous!
June 21st, 2011 at 8:04 am
Beautiful.
June 21st, 2011 at 8:36 am
Wonderfully captured.
June 21st, 2011 at 9:03 am
Just beautiful … beautiful!
June 21st, 2011 at 12:45 pm
I love this. It just feels good on the tongue, and makes me feel all glowy inside – Not a great explanation, but true 🙂
June 21st, 2011 at 12:55 pm
You captured dusk at my house in your words. Beautiful!
June 21st, 2011 at 5:17 pm
Lovely little poem. You are not mediocre! Beautiful, fragile image.
June 21st, 2011 at 5:22 pm
wow, a beautiful ode to a serine summer night.
June 21st, 2011 at 5:24 pm
Succint. Like the soft shadows and purple glow. Strong rhymes.
June 21st, 2011 at 5:28 pm
as you made us pause in the moment to contemplate…very nicely penned minimalist…
June 21st, 2011 at 6:19 pm
Lovely and sweet.
June 21st, 2011 at 6:43 pm
in a word, “breathless”.. really quite lovely to read out loud.
great one shot!
June 21st, 2011 at 7:39 pm
Each little phrase contains specific beauty, unique imagery. The sweet rhyme sings.
June 21st, 2011 at 8:06 pm
Exactly!
I was living this just last night — love summer.
June 21st, 2011 at 10:40 pm
Just to pause and look for a moment, which you make the reader do, nice.
June 21st, 2011 at 11:47 pm
Gorgeous!
June 22nd, 2011 at 12:44 am
Stunning ode to mid summer night.
June 22nd, 2011 at 2:05 am
Wish I was the dragonfly! Beautiful words and image.
June 22nd, 2011 at 5:51 am
I loved the short, rhyming poem of yours. It provided a cool warmth on this summer day here, at my blistering home.
June 22nd, 2011 at 5:55 am
What a lovely verse. Soft yet sure.
June 22nd, 2011 at 8:59 am
and i exhale. summer evenings spoken in so few words.
June 22nd, 2011 at 10:31 am
Delicate tranquility in this piece. Your rhyme is lovely here ~ Rose
June 25th, 2011 at 2:57 am
pause in mid flight… that is now.. and beautiful verse… I liked it. It touched my thoughts…
Om Namah Shivaya
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