bloom
spinning
twirling
whirling
a life
i can make
no sense
of
should it be
this
difficult?
struggles
setbacks
in
decision
i want to be
a flower
my only
job
to grow.
.
.
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April 13th, 2011 at 3:40 pm
I’m all too familiar with ‘spinning’, ‘twirling’ and ‘whirling’, they’re regular visitors around here.
Just remember that even a flower has to push through a layer of earth before it can point its face towards the sun and grow.
April 13th, 2011 at 6:56 pm
i think you’d get frustrated not being able to create! 🙂
stunning image!
April 13th, 2011 at 7:50 pm
Sometimes it’s just so difficult, isn’t it? It is what it is but I’m wishing for you that it calms down soon. Everyone needs calm.
April 13th, 2011 at 10:00 pm
i want to be
a flower
my only
job
to grow.
Oh, wow, me too. This is beautiful, and the image is just right.
April 14th, 2011 at 4:29 am
We’re kind of all over the place right now, aren’t we? Sigh. I hope we settle soon.
April 14th, 2011 at 6:58 am
nice. its all part of life…the flower goes through its own struggles pushing up through the soil to get to where we see it…
April 14th, 2011 at 7:12 am
Oh that was beautiful !! :)There was pain and struggles in battle with winds and finally it ended up on being hopeful and moving on !I liked your style , simple yet subtle words:)
my only
job
to grow.
Thanks for giving smiles ! 🙂
April 14th, 2011 at 7:47 am
. . . and so you are!
April 14th, 2011 at 10:32 am
guess what. you are a flower. and all you’re doing, no matter what else is happening, is growing 🙂
grow baby grow
bloom baby bloom
xo
April 15th, 2011 at 3:03 am
melancholic words
April 15th, 2011 at 8:07 am
You seem to read my thoughts – but then you express them so much more beautifully! Thank you!
April 15th, 2011 at 8:11 am
That spinning..whirling..twirling. Just exactly how I’ve been feeling these days. So simple to simply grow!
April 18th, 2011 at 11:33 am
incredible imagery, masterful writing..
Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,
Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!
Hope to see you in.
Bless your talent.
Cheers.
xxx
April 19th, 2011 at 7:48 am
You speak my heart, as always.
April 21st, 2011 at 7:14 pm
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April 22nd, 2011 at 8:05 am
So beautiful!
April 23rd, 2011 at 1:18 pm
Love the processing here. Your poem is lovely as well.
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